It is a bit like "On a dark and stormy night..." and does read like a Citroen Xm brochure but then
again why not - as this
is after all a pitch to sell a car, so sell it well! At least the vibes when
bidding for the car are good and as you say Ken the car sounds like it's enjoyed regular
thorough enthusiast maintenance.
I just feel close ups of door armrests and rear vents are at the detriment to the main feelgood
shots of the whole car which are missing - something like the auction shots below sell the car
which after all is still a subjective and emotional purchase as well as a cerebral one. Just my
tuppenceworth and nobody has to agree with my picture comments - mind, I'm not trying to
score points or be clever, it's just I work in graphic design and advertising and also avidly follow
Citroens on ebay and daily watch what does and doesn't work.
It may be totally corny but a damned good picture
will sell as much as a 1000+ words
so combined with the 'small novel' description will be a really compelling proposition.
Some shots I've saved off ebay on my travels: it really does help to isolate the car,
get some light on it if it's a dark colour and get the whole thing in shot etc:
and some I've taken of a black s2 Exclusive - even some of these have confusing reflections:
I guess the thing about any forum is everyone has their own opinion and I may be making
an issue out of nothing..
Andrew